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Hello! Can I get some constructive critiques on my website? Thanks!?

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2006-08-14 09:56:26, Category: Programming & Design
it's www.sensationalsunshine.com I want to keep it fun, with bright colors- kid friendly but also enjoyable for adults. Am going to add more details and a gallery but I want to make the website nice and tight!:) I have a guest book but would like to have one where I can screen the entries first but don't know how to do that and I want to add paypal and an electronic version of the book I am selling (my daughter is a great author/illustrator and I can see her books in every bookstore one day). I also want to get a lot of hits on that site- any recommendations on what I need to do? Thank you so kindly for your time!!!

Answers

  1. illustrat_ed_designs

    On 2006-08-14 10:05:37


    I like it, I think if I could change anything, it would be the rollover for the navigation buttons. The images themselves are really cute, but when you rollover them, the get distorted in such a way that they're just not cute anymore. I really like the website though, and I hope Sunshine grows up to be a phenomenal creative force in the artistic world!

  2. Ken H

    On 2006-08-14 10:31:16


    I like it overall. Like an earlier respondent, I find it unobvious what I'm looking at sometimes. Especially if you want it to be easy for kids, you might want to find a more obvious way of presenting the content. I think the distorted pictures on mouse rollover are the kind of thing kids would think is cute...

  3. Tenar2

    On 2006-08-14 10:21:12


    1. remove the splash page it is one more useless click to get to the content, it doesn't tell me anything of what the site is. 2. I have no idea what I am looking at. You have to tell people what the site is by introducing it. Right now the site looks like it's about pets -dogs and cats and demon rodents. look at some other sites out there and give your site a common layout. Add a header and navigation area. 3. use real HTML links and not image maps. Google does not like content as images if you want anyone to find the site use Go to page for links. 4. Consistent layout get a theme and make each page follow it.